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ok heres the thing. Its just a simple Guy vs Organization. This needs more of a story. Also, the animation was Quite Jerky and very repetative. Blood like that will almost never splash on the same place of the body and bodies dont fall down like that. the gun sounds were off and the animation needed correction. Get A sprite sheet if you cannot draw it and get some accurate animation details. Try going about it from there.

January 3, 2009

Author's Response:

I CAN make good movies, I just don´t have time

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Score: 8

"Very nice"

submission: Terrible Secret Of Space

date: December 4, 2008

Nice but some things need to be fixed here such as all of the creepy faces and backgrounds. To think i found this on Wasted Talent!

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Score: 9

"I likes it"

submission: Madness Card Commercial

date: October 11, 2008

I liked it but it lacked something. i cant tell what tho. mayne put more things into it. and instead of madness day '08, make it something like, seeing everybody die at your hands, priceless. and instead of madness card, make it madness collection. it'd work. overall tho, nice job

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Score: 8

"Pretty good"

submission: Madness Restitution Prev.

date: September 27, 2008

It was really good, fluent and quite interesting. a few things to fix, new music, you need to add more actiony music for something like madness, it helps to use more hypertensive music such as faint by linkin park or try something like areodynamic by daft punk. 2:try making a bit more blood and make it so that kills arent so easy to make (remember how badly hank got beaten up in madness reddemer and constertation? try doing something like that). 3: make a good main menu screen. 4: make it so that its not only those people at the base and maybe some innocents and maybe police and stuff. thats it...

September 27, 2008

Author's Response:

Mean statement first to grab the readers attention:

Although I appreciate your opinion, there is no way I am puting in that mainstream bullshit music like Linkin Park, and espcially not Daft Punk.

Agreements and so forth:

Your points about the animations I agree with, I am very new to flash, and this Madness stuff is all i know how to do, so I agree it has bad bloods and stuff, and the menu, well for one, i threw that together Sunday night before Madness Day, and I am very bad at creating my own objects so the buttons and stuff were very poorly made, the transitions were just brightness tweens with the vcam. The button sounds were what I found on my computer from a madness sound pack I found.

Originally I had planned on just making an interactive menu with alot of actionscripty things like biographies for weapons I will use, and them being used in action and so forth, but I remembered how I don't remember my actionscript training therefore that was out of the picture.

The plotline of this preview, and the plotline for the real one, if I start it, let alone make it, will be to fill in the gap from when Jesus was raking leaves in Madness 6, to him jumping off the roof all pissed off at the end of Madness 7. If I added police in it wouldn't have followed the plot of the story. As for innocents, I was going to add Hotdog Vendor man in there since he is a kind of cameo and i was going to try to explain why Jesus didn't kill him in Madness 8.

Also note, the definition of restitution is also a hint towards what the plotline of my movie is, as well as what Krinkel's designed Jesus' goal to be, to restore normality.

Also look up Inundation if you don't know what that means either.

Oh and thanks for the review sir!